Demons[Eng]

Titel: Demons
Språk:Engelska
Typ av text:Egen berättelse
Antal kapitel hitills:1
Färdigskriven:Nej(duh!)
Rating:R
Beskrivning: Krig härjar i rymden efter Organisationens beslagtagning av en väldigt viktig fil som Federationen alltid har vakat över. Denna fil inehåller en viss information som kan utrota hela universum eller förändra den till ett paradis beroende på vem som använder datan i filen....

Jag vill ha konstruktiva kommentarer. Berätta gärna vad ni vill ha med senare, vad ni vill att jag ska ändra. Den här berättelsen kommer att inehålla mycket blod och våld i allmänhet, några små erotiska delar för dem som är känsliga för detta. Även mycket svärande kommer att förekomma. Därför varnar jag er detta: Om ni är extremt känsliga läsare, LÄS DÅ INTE DENNA BERÄTTELSE!!!


Chapter 1 The Skies turns black

1

Sophei woke up. The wind was howling and the trees were going back and forth outside. Sophei couldn't sleep because of the great noise the wind caused. She was lying in her bed five more minutes, trying to wake up.
Then she rose from the bed and went to look at the mirror. What she saw was a skinny girl at the age of 17 with long, brown hair which went down all the way to her waist. She had a necklace with a hex pentagram which symbolized Venus and love( Not devil worshipping as the other ones who knew nothing about symbolism thought ).
She felt the sudden, thick taste of whiskey and tequila on her tounge and her head started to ache once again as it had done many nights.
"What have become of me, dear god?" she asked. She ran to the bathroom and held herself over the sink. Then she threw up.
"Oh God..." she said. Then the girl she met yesterday appeared in her mind. She had shoulder long, blonde hair, green startling little eyes... God she was beautiful, Sophei thought. Now it frightened her. What the hell was wrong with her!? She was getting turned on by a girl! She immediately drew herself a hot bath. Then she was lying there for a long time, trying to get that image out of her mind. But the more she tried not to think about it, the more it appeared and drove her crazy... If she ever met her again...


2

"No trace of anything, over" he said, sitting in his cockpit. The small escape pod was flying in the air, searching for particles that had been left from that high energy particle beam. Or, at least they thought it was that. Now, when he did his usual scout, he found nothing.
"Strange, even a non high energy particle beam should at least have left behind something..." he said quietly to himself. He swore, then turned around to fly back.
"Hey, We finally found something! Wait... This is..." the voice asked.
"Turn back! Turn back, for fucks sake! You're going right in to it!" the voice yelled.
"What is it!?" the man asked, panicked.
"It's-" then the connection dissapeared. The man saw a blue light, then it all got black.
"We lost him..." they said in the control room, stunned after what they just had seen.

det var bra handling och jag är bra på engelska så det var lättläst

bra!!