Albus Potter and the Witch Hazel wand [ENG]

Titel: Albus Potter and the Witch Hazel wand
Språk: Engelska
Typ av text: Fanfiction
Antal kapitel hittills: 2
Färdigskriven: Nej
Rating: G
Beskrivning: Utspelar sig under Albus första år på Hogwarts.
Han och några vänner hittar en liten låda, med ett stort lås på. Den går inte att öppna.
Sedan en dag förstår Albus varför.


hur verkar det, ska jag börja?

om det blir något fel i stavningen eller grammatiken, berätta gärna vad som är fel

Det verkar jättebra
GO FOR IT GIRL
Draco håller med men jag kan inte få honom att le

1. Rabubb

Albus Severus Potter watched his father, Harry Potter, slowly becoming a small point.
The train ride was bumpy, and the fog made it impossible to see anything outside the window.
Albus glanced at his cousin Rose Weasley, who read a book aunt Hermione has given her.
Hogwarts- a history.

"Rose... Do you think James would hate me if I get sorted in Slytherin?" Albus asked her.
Harry had said that he would be able to choose Gryffindor over Slytherin, if he wanted to.
"Of course not, Albus. He is your brother."
"But out family has been Gryffindors in generations!" Albus said.
"Yes, I know that." she said, and looked straight at Albus. "It is okay to be nervous. I am too."
"Easy for you to say, you are going to be sorted in Gryffindor." Albus snorted.
Rose sighed and started to read the book again.

"Anything from the trolley?" A woman voice heard, from outside the compartment.
Albus looked out through the glass door.
A lady with an odd hat stood outside, with a trolley filled with different sweets, and pies.
He saw the Chocolate Frogs, and felt his mouth watering, and stepped out.
"Yes, please." Albus said. "Two Chocolate Frogs"
He saw a rainbow coloured jar with caramels in it.
"Excuse me, but what is that?" He said, poiting at the rainbow.
"It is called Rabubb." A boy with light brown hair said.
"And a jar of Rabubb." Albus said, grinning at the boy. The boy smiled.
"Here, dear." The lady who held the trolley reached Albus two Chocolate Frogs, and the rainbow jar. "Two galleons." she said. Albus handed her the wizard-money, and then she moved with the trolley behind them.
"May I...?" The boy with light brown hair pointed at the compartment, Albus just opened again.
"Of course." Albus answered, and went in.
"I am Blade. Blade Night."
"I am Albus Potter, and this is my cousin Rose."
Rose looked up at Blade, and smiled.

Albus stared at the jar he held in his hand.
"Try one, you will see." Blade grinned.
Albus opened the jar, and put a blue and yellow caramel in his mouth.
"Are they popping?" Blade grinned again.
"Yes they are..." Bubbles in blue and yellow came out of his mouth. "Why...?" More bubbles.
Rose stared at Albus, giggling.
"It is actually a potion in them." Blade said.
"Effervescea." she said uninterested.
"What!?" Blade and Albus said.
Rose sighed.
"It is the Effervescea potion in them."
"I knew that!" Blade snorted.
Albus grinned. Blade tried not to, but he failed.
They burst out in a laughter, all three.

This is GOD!!
Riktigt bra jobbat, den ff är jättebra jag vill ha mer

Azum!♥