Hogwarts 1985/86 [ENG]

Titel: Hogwarts 1985/86
Språk: Engelska
Typ av text: Fanfiction
Antal kapitel hittills: 4
Färdigskriven: Nej
Rating: [G]/[PG]
Beskrivning: Alice is about to start her 5th year at Hogwarts. But what will happen? And who's going to become a great deal of her life?

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Chapter 1 - The letter

The lightning struck and the thunder was loud. Alice woke up when something was on her window. What was that? Again, it was almost like someone was knocking on the window, but it wasn’t a fist. It was something much smaller. Every now and then the knocking came again, interrupting the rain pouring down. “Okay, that’s enough” thought Alice and got up from her bed. She went straight through the room to the window.
She didn’t see anything. Was she standing by the wrong window? No, she couldn’t. If the knocking had been on the window closest to her bed it would have been much louder. She turned around ready to go back to bed, but there it was again. As fast as she could she turned once more, it was like a game of cat and mouse. This time she wouldn’t move. She would stand there, by that window, and watch. This time she would look right in the eyes of the responsible one who had woke her up from a wonderful dream.
She had been back at Hogwarts school of witchcrafts and wizardy, she had once again reunited with her friend, watched all the poor first years wandering around, having no clue where their transfiguration class where suppose to be, or how they would come down to the dungeon and poison class.
Oh, there it was again. And now, she was looking right into its big light eyes. Alice smiled and opened up the window. A rather small light brown with a bit of white, and something rectangular and sandy white in its beak, figure flew into her room. It was an owl. Any other 15 year old in the neighborhood would have freaked out, started screaming and jumping around. But Alice didn’t. The owl landed on her dresser and she walked to it and took the letter. She knew exactly what it was, she couldn’t stop smiling. Although she already knew what was standing on the envelope she read it.
To: Miss Alice Bunker
Inwood Ave 14
Hounslow
She turned the envelope; saw the symbol she knew so well. At last she opened up the letter. Inside there were three letters. One of them was a welcoming to this year’s school year at Hogwarts. The second one was a list of things she and the other fifth graders, or it was really just a list of books she would need. She wasn’t surprised at all to find those to letters inside, but a third? What was that all about? In excitement she put the envelope and the two first letters down on her desk and sat down at her bed. She unfolded letter number three, hands shaking.
It looked exactly the same as the others, except for the content. She just couldn’t believe what she read. Could this really be true, was she really reading it right? Was it perhaps send to the wrong person? No, her name was mentioned more than once in the text. After reading the text over and over, she put it down on the bed. Thought for a moment and realized. Yes, it could be true. She was going to be one of the two new Ravenclaw prefects. She had totally forgot that the two prefects that had been before ended their seven years at Hogwarts last spring, and there were going to be to new picked to the autumn. And after a second thought she was perfect for the job. Normally she didn’t think of herself like that, but it was true. During all her four years she had always been a great student, she knew everything that was going around in the Ravenclaw house… actually… she knew what was going around the whole school. Alice Bunker never missed a single thing.

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Chapter 2 – Just a dream

Although she was full of excitement and had far too much energy she decided to go back to bed. She went up to the board she had at the wall above her desk and took last year’s two letters and put them in one of the boxes at the desk where she kept all her Hogwarts paper. Where they had been she pinned up the three new letters. She starred at the prefect letter once more. Smiled, then she looked at the moving picture under the board. In the picture were all of her friends from Hogwarts. They were all grinning big. Alice and her closest girlfriend Julie were hugging each other while her closest boyfriends Joseph and Marcus hung over them. She missed them, a lot. It was a few days ago that she heard from any of them. They were all probably up to things all the time. A thought came to her, what if all the prefect job she would have to do now would keep her from her friends. She decided to put the thought away and went back to bed. She laid down and starred at the ceiling. After a while she turned her head slightly to the left to have a look at the clock: 03.48. No way could she go up for the day at this time. She had to sleep.
She was almost a sleep, so close, when something tickled her in the ear. Tiered of always being woken up she got annoyed. Once more she turned her head to the left to stare right into two familiar eyes.
“Well hello there Pinncie.” She murmured. The grey cat looked at her. The cat gave a little sound and curled up in the bed. Alice looked at her cat, it wasn’t the first night she had woke her up and then fallen asleep in a few seconds while she, Alice, couldn’t.
“So, your own bed isn’t good enough for you?” she said to Pinncie and tried to fall back asleep.
Apparently she had managed to fall asleep this night as well, because she woke up by the sun warming up her room this morning too. As every other morning she got up her bed, almost knocked Pinncie out of the bed, pulled back the curtains and looked up to the blue sky. It was half past ten, Saturday morning and the weather was wonderful. She heard how her younger sister and brother were tumbling around in the house. Then it came to her mind, had she been woken up by an owl in the middle of the night? Or was it just one more dream? With closed eyes she walked towards her desk, if it had really happened, she would see three letters pinned to the board, if it had been a dream only last year’s letters would be there. One… two… three… Open! She opened up her eyes quickly, and gave the board in front of her a big grin. It was true, all the three letters was pinned up there on the board. The welcome letter, the letter with all the books and other stuff that would be needed during this year and there it was: the prefect letter. Almost skipping she went down to the kitchen for some breakfast.
In the kitchen sat her father at the table and read the newspaper. Taking a look at the clock on the wall she guessed her mother had gone off to work. A few months ago she had started working half day at Saturdays. Her father took a glance at her.
“Someone looks happy this morning.” He said smiling to her.
“Oh, yes.” She answered and while she took some breakfast she told her father what had happen during the night. She finished the story and took the paper that lay on the table. At the exact moment as her father opened his month to comment the story his daughter had told him someone gave a high tone scream from upstairs. Then, quick footsteps in the stairs, after just a few seconds an eleven year old girl ran into the kitchen. No one could miss that she was Alice younger sister. They both had long ash blond slightly curly hair and big hazel brown eyes. Both of them were rather small, unlike their brother and father who both were very tall. Alice looked at her sister with a confused look.
“What’s going on Jenni?” she asked.

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Hittade två saker men har glömt bort vad det ena var xD Det kanske bara är jag men den här meningen "and then said:
“Someone looks happy this morning.” He said smiling to her."
Jag tycker det låter lite konstigt med and then said och sen igen efter vad han sagt he said

True story. Ändrade det nu, tack!